Nnnnf, I'd love to see a story along these lines some time, the below image was always my personal favorite of yours.
I remember seeing someone made a caption for it, but I wouldn't know how to find it again.It could be cool if I made a game using something like Ren'Py where this was a potential "Bad End" scenario. I would need to make more art assets first though.
I'd take it as a good sign that even though you may have spent more time on the old one, the newer one looks better defined (to me at least).
I am getting a Ron Stoppable and Mrs. Possible vibe with this one.